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October 06, 2006
The Love I Have Yet To Have
I want to love.
Deeper, broader, fuller than I've ever known.
This love is a full, sweet, satisfying love.
This love is not selfish in any way.
It continually thinks of others, and never itself.
This love is pulchritudinous, long, never-ending.
This love is not bought, neither is it sold.
All who see this love desire it, or at least it's qualities.
This love, is the love I have yet to have.
Posted by Addison on October 6, 2006 07:19 PM
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Love's "pulchritudinous", eh? Now, this is just my personal preference, but when I read poetry I don't generally like to have to look up words in the dictionary. And for a word that means, "physically beautiful" it sure doesn't sound beautiful. But don't let critique bother you. I just felt like picking on the word.
The rest is good. It's definitely written from the heart and one can't argue with that.
Posted by: Tolkienist at October 6, 2006 09:14 PM
1. It really wasn't poetry. At least, I didn't intend it to be....
2. Just sort of grabbed that word. Thought it fit.
3. Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by: Addison Todd at October 10, 2006 06:27 PM
I'm Glad you Blogged this.
Posted by: Paul at October 10, 2006 07:23 PM
You wrote that? wow.
Posted by: WW at October 11, 2006 10:24 AM
